Wednesday 27 March 2013

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Charlotte (Andy), Becky (Andrew), Gabby (Andrew), Shay (Andrew), Phil (Andy)

3 comments:

  1. Jodie, Becky and Jess

    - Target audience was clearly aimed at teenagers
    - Tracking in the title sequence was very accurate and effective
    - Worms view and spinning in the woods was very effective
    - Sound reflected the mood and matched what was going on in the context
    - Ending wasn't very clear. Could have been improved. We didn't really understand what was happening at the end

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  2. The target audience seems to be teenagers 15-18. It would work nicely as a full length thriller film as there is many questions that I personally wanted to know - what happens next? who's at the door? Camera work overall was very good, variety of shots: close ups and long shots however the lighting in some of the shots was a bit dark which could be improved on. Also some of the shots had a bigger frame than others which also could be improved on. The non diegetic sound used was very intense and well used, it puts the audience on the edge of their seats. Overall, the acting was very well and to improve: lighting in some shots and the framing of some of the shots could be changed.

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  3. Candice-
    The target audience could be aimed at both teenagers and adults, I would say 16+.
    I really liked the contrast variation of camera movement, particularly at the beginning of the sequence the the shots from on to another, one that appears to be a POV shot and the other that is a tilting up shot slowly revealing a female character laying on the ground. The variation of shots gives the audience a good view on the atmosphere around.
    There is a variety of camera angles from long shots of the setting to extreme close ups of the characters face.
    The non-diegetic sound in contrast with the the lighting gives a spooky and moody feel to the atmosphere adding tension.
    I really like how the title is displayed after the hit of a bat as it makes it more dramatic as it comes across the screen in addition with the change of music.
    Overall it is a good opening to a thriller as it creates enigma and has me gripped from the beginning to what may happen next. The settings were well thought out.

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