Well done all of you - a very successful prelim. Clear illustration of all 3 editing techniques - lots of MOA - around the door and the running are very well crafted. You do not break the 180 rule and you employ S/RS successfully. In addition, some of your cmaera movement is very good - in the corridor. Very good and correct use of a dissolve too. Low angle work is also appropriate - you look quite intimidating Charlie! Couple of constructice criticisms - Not sure that you framing where you take out top of Zoe's head is always appropriate - no problem in doing this, you just needed to be in closer I feel. When Zoe sits down, you needed a MoA to get round difficulty of when she sits down you have lots of empty frame above her head. The only other thing was composition where charlotte is tapping her foot - perhaps foot and table leg needed to be separated. These are monor things and the intention is purely to push you to the very highest level which this suggests you are capable of. Well done.
Well done all of you - a very successful prelim. Clear illustration of all 3 editing techniques - lots of MOA - around the door and the running are very well crafted. You do not break the 180 rule and you employ S/RS successfully. In addition, some of your cmaera movement is very good - in the corridor. Very good and correct use of a dissolve too. Low angle work is also appropriate - you look quite intimidating Charlie! Couple of constructice criticisms - Not sure that you framing where you take out top of Zoe's head is always appropriate - no problem in doing this, you just needed to be in closer I feel. When Zoe sits down, you needed a MoA to get round difficulty of when she sits down you have lots of empty frame above her head. The only other thing was composition where charlotte is tapping her foot - perhaps foot and table leg needed to be separated. These are monor things and the intention is purely to push you to the very highest level which this suggests you are capable of. Well done.
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